Monday, March 7, 2011

On reading Erica Jong

Ruby lips unzipping, show teeth,
what’s it mean,
a woman’s mouth,

does it say, bite hard
with candour,
nude of face, bare of torso,
rolled up female impersonator
on the marriage bed,
as a gold coin fell, continues
the bliss somewhere, insatiable.
Fear of flying no more.
Process notes: The prompt from Poetry Tow Truck is http://djvorreyer.wordpress.com/2011/03/05/poetry-tow-truck-11-the-books-the-thing/ "The Book's The Thing". I took the cover picture of a lipsticked mouth from Erica Jong's "Fear of Fifty" and took off from there. 
You are a writer, which means you are also a reader. So grab a book – and let’s get started.
Choose a book, any book. (Kristin brought old, used books when we tried this prompt.)  The book itself is your prompt. This could mean the words found on its pages, but it could also mean any of the following:

  1. The cover (image or leather or embossed)
  2. The front pages (cities, dates, other titles by the author.)
  3. Illustrations (including author photos, center inserts, etc.)
  4. Table of Contents/Index/Appendices
  5. Marginalia, bookstore markings.

11 comments:

  1. Thanks for stopping over to try the prompt - I love your image of the lips unzipping.

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  2. wow...stunning flow and vivid imagery, nicely rendered...fly on...

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  3. powerful imagery..
    love your style.
    welcome to JP..

    A++

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  4. @Donna: I'm enjoying your prompts!
    @Brian: Thanks, yea, let's fly!
    @Jingle: Hey it's me!

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  5. hahahaha- very unusual style this time irene.. try my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/

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  6. @fiveloaf: Yup I can be pretty unusual.
    @Jingle: Forced to decamp till wordpress comes back to me.

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  7. I love the questions asked, answered and yet not answered. This is a poem that a reader can bring to and create with. Enjoyable. Love the prompt too.

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  8. I like how this asks questions and invites the reader to co-create. Nice poem, post and prompt.

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  9. @Yousei: You know, we live in a misognistic culture. The female is always debased. I get that from Erica Jong. It's a thing that persists and I wanna blame ... who can I blame? Women themselves! Female power is always subversive. The new feminism is to not be like a man, but to hold on to this subversive power, to make it real.

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  10. Greetings!

    Thanks for the lovely contribution to potluck on week 25,

    week 26 is open NOW, we treasury your poetry

    And hope to see you in shortly…old poems are welcome!

    xoxox

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